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Hi there, I feel like this page is quite messy especially on its "Pranala Luar" (External Links) section. I am new at Wikipedia and I'm still not sure how I can make this better.
According to Wikipedia:Pranala luar, on the English version it's said: "... it is not Wikipedia's purpose to include a lengthy or comprehensive list of external links related to each topic".
Meanwhile, on this article, the external link is too lengthy and grammatically messy (even the first sentence doesn't really make sense). I also checked the link, and turns out that the page can't be found. Any suggestion from experienced editor? Chn99 (bicara) 30 Juni 2016 07.18 (UTC)
- @Chn99: Alas, we're perennially short of editors who knows topics like this one. Would you lend a hand? ꦱꦭꦩ꧀ ‑Ｂｅｎｎｙｌｉｎ ｢komunikasi｣ 25 Juli 2016 - 18:08 WIB
- @Bennylin: Hi, it seems like someone else have made the changes for the problem I mentioned before (text under External Links / Pranala Luar), so it's all sorted for now. But I'll still try to improve this article! Thanks! Chn99 (bicara) 27 Juli 2016 04.10 (UTC)