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Tentang penggantian kata mendaki menjadi menaklukkan[sunting sumber]
Saya telah mengganti kalimat "yang pertama kali mendaki" menjadi "yang pertama kali menaklukkan" karena sebelum Hillary sudah pernah ada yang mendaki Gunung Everest, tapi Hillary lah yang pertama kali kembali dengan selamat setelah mendaki gunung tersebut. --LouCypher 07:10, 22 Jan 2005 (UTC)
External links found that need fixing (November 2023)[sunting sumber]
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- http://www.aucklandmuseum.com/war-memorial/online-cenotaph/record/C122000 is found to be dead. Recommend adding https://web.archive.org/web/20220525042551/https://www.aucklandmuseum.com/war-memorial/online-cenotaph/record/C122000 to the original URL.
- https://www.achievement.org/achiever/sir-edmund-hillary/ is found to be dead. Recommend adding https://web.archive.org/web/20230402123446/https://achievement.org/achiever/sir-edmund-hillary/ to the original URL.
- https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/American_Academy_of_Achievement is found to be dead. Recommend adding https://web.archive.org/web/20231001064806/https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/American_Academy_of_Achievement to the original URL.
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